2 posts / 0 new
Last post
Offline
Joined: 2010-05-27
On Frosty Narcissus

Forsythia blossoms litter the sidewalk--

golden
windswept
memories

Twilight presses through budding salix--

glinting
windswept
dreams

Prunus scent drifts unconsciously--

sweeping
windswept
clouds

Leafing deutzias dance in throng--

feeding
windswept
numbness

Northern air frosts narcissus--

Comment viewing options

Select your preferred way to display the comments and click "Save settings" to activate your changes.
Offline
Joined: 2010-05-27

I still haven't figured out how to shape poems well on this board...there's a lot more going on in the above peice when it's not left-aligned...but alas, computers often edit art simply because logic cannot understand it.

Login or register to post comments